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Post by Koa on May 23, 2016 8:31:05 GMT -5
This, this place we are in, it isn't real. It was never real. People say there is an infinity behind a persons eye's, In a way they are right. There is something living inside us, breathing with our souls. One by one we are all realizing that there is no omniscient god, after all how could there be? and even if there is one does it deserve to be worshiped? Some of us think we are gods, but again, why should anyone worship us? as impure as we all are we still have the audacity to call ourselves good. Keep that in mind, it will be important later. Our reality is nothing more than the fantasies of a flawed mind, a mad mind. Now keep in mind I said that the place we are in isn't real not us, We are real, we are very real; we are alive. If you want to be worshiped you have to earn it. Don't fool yourself, you want to be worshiped; in fact some might say that they need to be. How will you earn it? how will we earn it? After all it would be rather lonely to be a god all alone, wouldn't it?
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Post by Deleted on May 23, 2016 15:48:36 GMT -5
Where's the experiment in this? Is it how fast somebody can institute themselves as god of meme arrows?
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Post by Koa on May 24, 2016 9:34:58 GMT -5
Hello, me again. I saw something. It definitely didn't look like it's from around here, Earth I mean, it didn't look like it come from Earth. By the gods what is going on here. This was supposed to be a business trip; now it's morphed into a full blown crazy fest. I still don't understand what happened here. I was told it was the gas, oh gods the gas. It was blue, the gas I mean, of course. It came out of no where, I was waiting for the conference to start and then there it was. Then everything went to hell, People clawing at the doors trying to get out, I stood in horror as I realized we were locked in. Who had locked us in? and why? The ones who didn't die from being trampled by the stampede stumbled around, dazed. Why hadn't I been effected? At that very moment someone grabbed my shoulder, It was Lindsey from accounting. I looked into her eyes, horror had filled her eyes; as, I assume, it had with mine.
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Post by Planetbox on May 24, 2016 19:06:03 GMT -5
ok
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Post by Deleted on May 24, 2016 19:23:57 GMT -5
I'm slightly confused but more interested by how this will end.
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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2016 6:25:00 GMT -5
Looks to be a story now. I'm a little inclined to join in now honestly.
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Post by Koa on May 25, 2016 8:41:12 GMT -5
Blood? Yes, this is blood, still warm even. Bloodies, of course there are bodies, where else would the blood have come from? Then there was the door, still open. That's where it was, behind the door. It was a trap, of course it was a trap, what else would it have been? We knew it was a trap, the only thing we could do was try and prepare ourselves. After all it has been two days. Two days sense the gas, no food and no water. We had to leave. most had recovered from the gas, the ones that didn't sat crying for hours and eventually stopped, none of us had the guts to see if they were dead or not, all we could do was wonder what the hell that gas had done to us. There were 12 of us at this point, Me, Lynn, a few from PR, and three from Mail. That should have been a red flag. Why would the mail staff be at a corporate conference? Maybe if someone had noticed how out of place they were this whole thing could have been avoided. That's not our concern now though. Lynn and I had chosen to keep the fact that we weren't effected a secret, Could that have saved someone? Well anyway, we had found only one way out, that door, even the air vents were blocked. after a day or so we realized we couldn't stay in that room forever. We made a plan, we thought it was a good one, we thought we were prepared. Looking back I know we couldn't have been prepared, Who could have been prepared for that? We gathered by the door, armed with chair legs and microphone stands, when we through the door open we all rushed though. There it was. It wasn't human, and some how beep down I knew it wasn't from here, from earth. It ate three of them. It had gotten full after that I guess, so it just ripped another two apart, limb by limb, and slit another three. Now there are four, four of us, Me, Lynn, Dave from PR, and Oliver, an intern from the mail room. The thing is gone. Now it's just us. Let's hope it stays that way.
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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2016 8:49:45 GMT -5
Well, that escalated. Now I REALLY want to see how it ends.
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Post by Koa on May 25, 2016 8:51:23 GMT -5
Well, that escalated. Now I REALLY want to see how it ends. What did you expect?
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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2016 9:41:41 GMT -5
Well, that escalated. Now I REALLY want to see how it ends. What did you expect? In all honesty, I figured something like that was about to happen. You write incredibly well, by the way.
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Post by Planetbox on May 26, 2016 8:03:08 GMT -5
rip two people from mail.
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Post by Koa on May 26, 2016 8:08:05 GMT -5
We gathered ourselves one by one, and the others, well ... we gathered them piece by piece. After all it wouldn't be right to leave them scattered about. Carefully placing each limb in their respective places the reality of the situation began to sink in. There we 164 people dead in the room we had originally gathered in, and another eight here in the hallway. Once we had draped the large curtains, that had previously adorned stage, over the masses of dead bodies we sat in silence. Why was it that people did that? Cover the dead I mean. Was it a sigh of respect, or an act of fear? Both seem equally possible. Hours had gone by, we were exhausted. Never the less we stood up, all together this time, and walked slowly to the main doors of the complex. stepping through the doors, I took a breath. A deep liberating breath. That is when the world went dark.
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Post by Deleted on May 27, 2016 6:25:27 GMT -5
Oh dear.
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Post by Planetbox on May 27, 2016 15:36:36 GMT -5
This doesn't look good...
This is extremely well-written though. You're portraying these people's emotion really well.
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Post by Koa on Jun 2, 2016 17:26:22 GMT -5
Voices, calling out into the void. Calling me to me, Begging me to me. taunting me with the spoils of death, peace, tranquility, and most of all, answers. Answers to those questions that we can’t answer in our world. They are too big. After all, how could you know the secrets of the universe and still stand to live in such a simple place. A place where things that could be are called fantasy, and things that shouldn’t be are; the voices yearn for a new soul to devour, I can tellI. they want my will, my will to live. I’m not ready to give that, not after what I’ve just seen. There are too meany questions that I need answered. Maybe if they had called me before I would have gone. Now I know I can’t. Can’t is a very strong word. I would say, won’t. I wont let them have me yet. Not till I get these questions answered. I must be insane, but this is the only thing I can do. I can only hide from what lays in that fog. I need to stay here, close to where I woke up. I’m not awake though. I know it, yet I don’t. Like a vivid dream. You know there is something off but you just don't have the heart to confess to yourself that it isn’t real; because your wishing so hard that it is. That you can just give up. I don't know what it is that makes me want to live now. Now of all times, after one of the most traumatizing things I had witnessed. It couldn’t be the good graces of God. I’m starting to bout there is one at this point. Why would a God let this happen. My hands are still sticky with blood. Still stained crimson with the life force of all that had been so alive such a short time ago. My eyes, What is wrong with my eyes? They seem out of focus. Like there is more too be seen but it doesn't want to be seen. Like the shadows are alive and inside them lays something hidden. Something that has been there all along but you never noticed it before. Maybe it wants to me notice? Or maybe it has something to do with being so close to death. I might never know; I should say, I don't ever want to know. I don’t ever want to face an evil so monumental that even the light is scared of it. I imagine you wouldn't want to either. No more voices, No more voices. Had they realized that I was never going to go with them? or were they scared away? The shadows would have sent me bolting into the nearest church if I hadn’t just faced the devil myself; but I could feel it too. Fear, a presence of witch you are not aware of until the hairs on you neck stand on end, till the bones in your inner most core are chilled to the point of braking. Till our heart jumps to your throat and everything falls away for a second, and when it comes back it’s all so much more clear. So much more vivid. The sun, Its going down. I need to walk. I need to do it now.
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Post by Planetbox on Jun 3, 2016 15:38:06 GMT -5
That was a good update.
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Post by Dimitri on Jun 3, 2016 17:47:55 GMT -5
This story is... Intriguing.
Also, slightly terrifying.
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Post by Koa on Sept 14, 2016 20:59:16 GMT -5
Three months and eleven days, that's how long I was in that coma. Three months and eleven days the world went by without noticing my absence. It was in the news though "The Pittsburgh massacre" is what they called it. the only problem with that is we went in Pittsburgh, not even close, in fact we were twenty five hundred miles away in Sacramento. I've never even been east of the mississippi. But, Why would they lie about where we were? and why didn't anyone notice? I mean someone had to notice. It seems it was all just swept under the rug and cleaned things up to look like nothing had happened, Even my family didn't know they thought I was off traveling, I mean who buys that, someone doesn't just take off one day and not come back or even send a post card for three months. Even here, standing in the same lecture hall it all happened in you wouldn't know it. The blood soaked carpet was spotless, the blood splattered walls were now the same deep blue they were when I had first seen them. There wasn't a single shred of evidence left to show even the best detective that something terrible had happened here. I guess that rules out going to the cops. I have one piece of evidence, not even that, It was just a clue, A newspaper clipping from the New York tribune, dated nine days after the massacre, it said that the man responsible had been locked up for life, a man named Charlie Goodman. I guess that's where i'll start.
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Post by Planetbox on Sept 15, 2016 19:21:52 GMT -5
Intriguing...
I'm excited to see what happens next.
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